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The train...

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The train sent on December 01, 2017 (20:54) by Inverno_Muto. 13 comments, 291 views. [retina]

, 1/250 f/13.0, ISO 100, hand held.




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avatarsenior
sent on December 04, 2017 (16:51) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

An interesting shot regarding the composition, the PP and the management of the lights do not convince me. The sea is completely overexposed, with lights burned, the contrast too marked clashes with the scene you want to shoot (a seascape with soft lights in the afternoon), the sky has an unnatural gray.
In conclusion, good choice of scene and composition, to be reviewed PP and lighting management.
David

avatarjunior
sent on December 04, 2017 (16:59) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

Well actually I wanted the sea burned, the sun was 15.00 and I took the photo against the light so that the burnt of the sea collided with the black train, and could be glimpsed from the windows.

avatarsenior
sent on December 04, 2017 (20:37) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

The intent and the composition are interesting ... but the sky of an unnatural gray jars, both in the more "maritime" vision of baribal and in your extreme bianconero vision ... I would try a less aggressive pp (if the sea is burnt remains white) and a more natural development of the sky ..

avatarjunior
sent on December 05, 2017 (13:59) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

Very particular, I sincerely took a while 'to understand the train ...

avatarsenior
sent on December 05, 2017 (18:17) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

The idea is interesting but the lower part is too dirty in the composition, both in the central and left side. I understand the intentions but also to me the post seems too aggressive, beyond the point of the strong contrast. If it's okay for the windows it's not good for the rest. But maybe it's my monitor. A greeting.

avatarsupporter
sent on December 06, 2017 (12:32) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

It is so burnt that the corneas ahahah has sifted me
joke!!!
I understand your intent, but the backlight would have come out the same by exposing correctly to the sea, and would have avoided that ugly halo on the train, which would have come completely black.
the train on the bridge is interesting because it seems so black at first sight :-D

avatarsenior
sent on December 06, 2017 (14:41) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

Nice backlight and excellent conversion in b & n, a red filter would have given more prominence to the clouds

avatarjunior
sent on December 06, 2017 (14:45) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

Bottom dirty is true I did a thousand tests of crop but nothing was the least chaotic. :-D
Morgana as a halo? :-or
Riccardo thanks for the advice.

avatarjunior
sent on December 06, 2017 (20:33) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

I like the photo up to the sky. The contrast between the sea and the train makes good and the effect of the windows looks like an old film of negatives. I would try to change the sky in PP to make it darker and pair with the bridge.

avatarjunior
sent on December 07, 2017 (11:43) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

I would try to apply a filter in the sea belt, to lower the exposure a lot.
particular the point of recovery and the composition!

avatarjunior
sent on December 10, 2017 (16:10) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

The sea so exposed unfortunately goes to remove all the importance that should have the train, unfortunately at first glance I did not take it in the least.

avatarjunior
sent on December 11, 2017 (0:55) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

The parallelism between sky and train creates a bit of confusion, probably accentuated by the fact that the sky is extremely burned.

avatarjunior
sent on December 11, 2017 (9:19) | This comment has been translated

Thank you all!



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