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user81826 | sent on July 27, 2017 (10:38) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)
Hi, the idea is cute and black and white does not make me crazy but the gray tones help to "hide" them if that was the purpose.
People on the left really occupy an excessive portion of the frame over the others and end up attracting attention on themselves by unbalance the composition. Even the cut statue helps to create disorder.
I think a vertical cut including only the distant people along with the bride and leaving the statue intact would be of greater interest. Ciao, l'idea è carina ed il bianco e nero non mi fa impazzire ma i toni di grigio aiutano a "nascondere" li sposi se quello era lo scopo.
Le persone sulla sinistra occupano davvero una parte eccessiva del fotogramma rispetto alle altre e finiscono per attirare l' attenzione su di sé sbilanciando la composizione. Anche la statua tagliata aiuta a creare disordine.
Credo che un taglio verticale includendo solo le persone in lontananza insieme agli sposi e lasciando la statua integra sarebbe stato di maggiore interesse. |
| sent on July 27, 2017 (11:49) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)
Do you say so best?
dici cosi' meglio ?
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| sent on July 27, 2017 (12:37) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)
Then the idea I like but the problem is that the spouses do not really notice much, they too confuse with the crowd! The presence of a lot of elements almost creates a disorder seems like a wally look! Allora l'idea mi piace ma il problema è che gli sposi si notano veramente poco , si confondono troppo con la folla ! la presenza di moltissimi elementi crea quasi disturbo sembra un cerca wally ! |
| sent on July 27, 2017 (12:42) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)
True we say that the title was born after the shot also because I did not lose it from far away so with a 50mm equivalent vero diciamo che il titolo è nato dopo lo scatto anche perchè per non perderlo ho scattato da lontano quindi con un 50mm equivalente |
| sent on July 27, 2017 (13:10) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)
Sincerely the choice of this type of b / w does not convince me, but I like a lot the title that invites you to look for the bride and groom in the picture! I would say that I leave it as it is because it invites you to look better (perhaps improving shadows and making it a little darker so you can have a good improvement.)
Kevin Sinceramente la scelta di questo tipo di b/w non mi convince, però mi piace un sacco il titolo che invita a cercare gli sposi nella foto! Io direi di lasciarla così com'è dato che invita ad osservare meglio(migliorando magari ombre e rendendo il tutto un pochino più scuro in modo da avere un netto miglioramento.)
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| sent on July 27, 2017 (13:14) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)
Do you prefer this?
questo preferisci?
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| sent on July 27, 2017 (13:15) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)
I like the scene I like very much. The only thing I could do was to open the diaphragm to the point where only the spouses would be focused. A me la scena colta mi piace molto. Unico accorgimento avrei aperto al massimo il diaframma per avere a fuoco solo gli sposini. |
user81826 | sent on July 27, 2017 (13:22) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)
The last cut I like decisively more than the first one. It remains the idea of ??the search but partially rejects the composition with one person per side!
If you were held parallel to the strips on the ground and sacrificed a bit of floor leaving the statue intact would have been perfect for me.
L'ultimo taglio mi piace decisamente di più rispetto al primo. Resta l'idea della ricerca ma si ribilancia in parte la composizione con una persona per lato!
Se in fase di scatto ti fossi tenuto parallelo alle striscie a terra e avessi sacrificato un po' di pavimento lasciando la statua intatta sarebbe stata perfetta per me.
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| sent on July 27, 2017 (13:37) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)
True ... thank you PaoloPgC
Ok Riccardo.asselta
vero... grazie PaoloPgC
ok Riccardo.asselta
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| sent on July 27, 2017 (14:30) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)
The sx side says little or nothing
The low floor says little or nothing
The late dx with the young shoulders says little or nothing
The photo is full of uninterrupted components that occupy most of the space.
I would take the middle part of dx after the two seated and sx, grainy, but it is fun with the Chinese spouses and the people who look at it.
By the way, I noticed that they were Chinese, zooming in the picture.
Il lato sx dice poco o nulla
Il pavimento basso dice poco o nulla
Il late dx con i giovani di spalle dice poco o nulla
La foto è piena di componenti fuori interesse che occupano quasi tutto lo spazio.
Io prenderei la parte centrale a dx dopo i due seduti e sx, sgranata si , ma è divertente con gli sposini cinesi e la gente che la osserva.
d'altronde ho notato che erano cinesini ingrandendo la foto.
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| sent on July 27, 2017 (14:35) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)
Do you mean that?
intendi cosi?
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| sent on July 27, 2017 (16:52) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)
Too chaotic the spouses just notice, the look does not focus on them ... troppo caos gli sposi si notano appena, lo sguardo però non si focalizza su di loro... |
| sent on July 27, 2017 (17:25) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)
It would already serve either a longer optics or a more targeted post production or a race to get closer :-) Già servirebbe o un ottica più lunga oppure un post produzione più mirata oppure una corsa per andare più vicino  |
| sent on July 27, 2017 (18:58) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)
A bit flat the Black and White and, honestly, a bit confusing the photo. The eye turns me without a target, I do not find a focal point to stop me ... an attempt to revise me. Un po' piatto il Bianco e Nero e, onestamente, un po' confusionaria la foto. L'occhio mi gira senza una meta, non trovo un punto focale su cui fermarmi... un tentativo da rivedere secondo me. |
| sent on July 27, 2017 (19:15) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)
OK thanks Ok grazie |
| sent on July 27, 2017 (19:19) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)
I find the dispersive shot. Too unrelated items with the theme of the photo. What really makes the click is difficult is the background. The cut of the statue eventually becomes the predominant element and the palace in the background introduces a lot of disturbance. Walking people could introduce dynamism but have put too many characters in the plan ahead of the bridal couple. To bring the attention back to the spouses might approach the scene, insert a vignetting around to make a spotlight and maybe insert a radial blur to give motion. So, however, it would kick off the initial shot. Trovo lo scatto dispersivo. Troppi elementi poco collegabili con il tema della foto. Quello che veramente rende difficile lo scatto è lo sfondo. Il taglio della statua alla fine diventa l'elemento predominante e il palazzo sullo sfondo introduce molto disturbo. La gente a passeggio potrebbe introdurre dinamicità ma si sono inseriti troppi personaggi nel piano davanti agli sposi. Per riportare l'attenzione sugli sposi si potrebbe avvicinare la scena, inserire attorno una vignettatura quansi a rendere un punto luce e magari inserire un radial blur per dare movimento. Così però si snaturerebbe lo scatto iniziale. |
| sent on July 27, 2017 (19:25) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)
True I would change the shot as it was born Vero andrei a modificare lo scatto così come è nato |
| sent on July 27, 2017 (19:42) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)
The idea I like, however, is perhaps a little too confusing, the girls on the left give me a bit of annoyance and black and white for my tastes is a bit too gray! L'idea mi piace, però è forse un pò troppo confusionaria, le ragazze sulla sinistra mi danno un pò fastidio e il bianco e nero per i miei gusti è un pò troppo grigio! |
| sent on July 27, 2017 (20:14) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)
OK thanks Ok grazie |
user75655 | sent on July 27, 2017 (22:07) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)
Does not convince me. Those I think are subjects blend in the mass. Black and white is too poisonous for my taste. I do not like framing: statue and left-handed person. To try again. Non mi convince. Quelli che credo fossero i soggetti si confondono nella massa. Il bianco e nero è troppo moscio per i miei gusti. L'inquadratura non mi piace: statua e persona a sinistra mozzate. Da riprovare. |
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