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sent on October 10, 2011 (17:26) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)
my modest reaction looking at the picture is that of finding a point on which to focus: there is the right flower but then there is the other surrounded by a capsule including pointing the observer and fuzzy then still fragments of yellow ... ;-)
with a macro lens I would recommend you to enter into a subject more defined, with 18-55 or enlarge looking for a more airy compo trying to play with the maf selective ... or to clean up a little 'cut scene (or moving) the elements too ... (Imho of course ... ;-)) la mia modestissima reazione guardando la foto è quella di non trovare un punto su cui focalizzare l'attenzione: c'è il fiore di destra ma poi c'è l'altro tutto circondato di capsule tra cui una che punta l'osservatore sfocata e poi ancora frammenti di giallo...
con un'ottica macro ti consiglierei di stringere su un soggetto più definito, col 18-55 o di allargare cercando una compo più ariosa cercando di giocare con la maf selettiva... o di ripulire un po' la scena tagliando (o spostando) gli elementi di troppo... (ovviamente imho...)
sent on October 10, 2011 (17:52) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)
You have been given good advice. Of course with a view like the one used you should pay more attention to the scene, at least moving the buds left. Of course this would not be enough because even the sharpness would have its importance, so take care in focusing on at least one of the parties, usually the one in the foreground. Ti sono stati dati ottimi consigli. Certo che con un'ottica come quella usata avresti dovuto porre più attenzione alla scena, almeno spostando i boccioli di sx. Naturalmente questo non sarebbe sufficiente perchè anche la nitidezza avrebbe la sua importanza, quindi avere cura nella messa a fuoco almeno su uno dei soggetti, generalmente quello in primo piano.