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| sent on December 21, 2011 (10:27) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)
Hello Bernardine, the composition seems a bit 'tight, I would have left more space both above and below the cut, and I would have avoided the second flower. The focus seems early, personally I would have centered on the flower in the foreground. Finally, if the black background is desired, I would try to make it completely black with no objects barely visible. If you leave more space between the flowers and the background, whatever it is, with the flash you should get a black background uniform. Hello ;-) Ciao Bernardine, la composizione mi pare un po' stretta, avrei lasciato più spazio sia sotto che sopra e avrei evitato il taglio del secondo fiore. La messa a fuoco mi pare anticipata, personalmente l'avrei centrata sul fiore in primo piano. Infine, se lo sfondo nero è voluto, cercherei di renderlo completamente nero senza oggetti appena visibili. Se lasci più spazio tra i fiori e lo sfondo, qualsiasi esso sia, con il flash dovresti ottenere uno sfondo nero uniforme. Ciao |
| sent on December 21, 2011 (12:02) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)
thanks, I'll try to do it again, I'll wait, In grazie, proverò a rifarla, ti aspetto, Nella |
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