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17.9 MEGAPIXEL

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My first portrait sent on February 04, 2014 (14:20) by Renatoa. 3 comments, 684 views.

, 1/200 f/2.8, ISO 100, hand held.

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13 persons like it: Adydesign, Andrea Biagiolini, Boccio Mura, Daniele Quaranta, Francesco Iafelice, Marzio Bambini, Matley Siena, Matteo M, Matteo87, Maurizioartax, Nikonista1960, Scuter1956, Valentino Soravia

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Renatoa

sent on February 06, 2014 (12:14) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

Members of Juza! You wonder if you can criticize me (as well as commentarmi) this shot! :) Grazieeeeee

Daniele Quaranta

sent on March 07, 2014 (18:45) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

I'll critic myself! Joking aside, the photo in substance and successful, unpretentious notes that I'd like you are in the first place would remove that corner in the top left and top right quell'angolino in which I disturb in general and from the subject. I would try to cut off the hair always underexposed left and center the photo to the model's face loa ... more next time I would try to close the aperture more (more or less on 5.6/6.3) so that the hair in the lower right are perfectly in focus.

The expression captured is very beautiful and spontaneous ... and this is a point in your favor, but try to evenly illuminate the entire face, it will benefit the photo.

I hope that was not too hard, and I state that all considerations are very personal ... Hope that utile (also because many of the things that I have "criticized" are errors that I do too:-D ...
See you soon on Juza ;-) ;-) ;-) ;-)

Renatoa

sent on March 10, 2014 (19:34)

Quari1982, grazie! Aspettavo molto un commento simile, cosi costruttivo e per nulla duro! Sei stato utilissimo e ho appuntato le tue critiche. Gli angoli in alto disturbano anche me, ci ho pensato dopo al fatto che i capelli potessero fare da cornice/sfondo al ritratto. Sull omogeneita della luce ci sto lavorando, spero di migliorare e sfruttarla al meglio. Per quanto riguarda i capelli fuori fuoco non so... a me piacciono cosi Sorriso

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Quari, grazie mille per il tuo contributo!!!!

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