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user20639 | sent on January 20, 2014 (17:35) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)
Should be reviewed, but it is beautiful. hello Andrebbe rivista, ma è bella. ciao |
| sent on January 20, 2014 (19:43) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)
Thank you!
What correggeresti? They are the first weapons ...
Grazie!
Cosa correggeresti? Sono alle primissime armi...
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user20639 | sent on January 20, 2014 (19:59) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)
Inanza all the framing, I would try to make it more harmonious. Necessary to remove some elements intruders, which are of disturbance, such as a cut to the left to remove the lamppost taken in half. It 'a job, but also would remove the iron trellis to the right, but only by cutting the tree to the right more blurred. I would modify even with a cut above, to remove the sign on the left and right blurred those branches. For the exposure and colors in my opinion might be okay, but I would give more light to the woman's legs and onto the sidewalk. The most important issue is to make it easier with cuts to the rest has the potential to become a very poetic photography, an allegory of the newspaper.
Hope that useful, hello. Inanzi tutto l'inquadratura, cercherei di renderla più armoniosa. Bisogna togliere alcuni elementi intrusi, che sono di disturbo, come un taglio a sinistra per togliere il lampione preso a metà. E' un lavoro, ma toglierei anche il traliccio di ferro a destra, ma tagliando solo l'albero a destra più sfocato. Modificherei con un taglio anche sopra, per togliere il cartello a sinistra e quei rami sfocati a destra. Per l'esposizione e i colori secondo me possono andare bene, ma darei più luce alle gambe della donna e sul marciapiede. La questione più importante è renderla più semplice con i tagli per il resto ha la potenzialità di diventare una fotografia molto poetica, un'allegoria del quotidiano.
Spero di esserti stato utile, ciao. |
| sent on January 24, 2014 (0:48) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)
Thank you very much! Grazie mille! |
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