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| sent on January 19, 2014 (10:59) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)
To be the first macro freehand and with the subject in business, I would say that you came out well.
Some considerations if you want to start you on this path.
In order to obtain a valid sharpness is essential to use the stand and at the same time heel elevator morning to be able to find who got little exercise to lower the temperature at night, this will give you the chance to get better detail.
In this case, I assume you used a diaphragm so open to further reduce the pdc seen the background a little 'this, in fact the maf propio falls on his head, fading gradually we move away from it.
Remember, however, that increasing the pdc and looking for a proper parallelism between the subject and the focal plane can get sharper photos.
In my opinion I would teachrite butterfly more to the right, you would have also eliminated the stem to the right of the frame.
With color balance, the red door to +10, you eliminate that slight dominant cyano.
Per essere la prima macro a mano libera e con soggetto in attività, direi che ne sei uscito bene.
Alcune considerazioni se vuoi incamminarti su questa strada.
Per poter ottenere una valida nitidezza è indispensabile l'uso del cavalletto e nello stesso tempo alzatacce mattutine per riuscire a trovare i soggetti poco attivi per l'abbassamento della temperatura notturna, questo ti darà la possibilità di poter ottenere un miglior dettaglio.
In questo caso suppongo tu abbia usato un diaframma così aperto per ridurre maggiormente la pdc visto lo sfondo un po' presente, infatti la maf cade propio sul capo, sfumando via via ci si allontani da esso.
Ricorda però che aumentando la pdc e cercando un parallelismo corretto tra soggetto e piano focale potrai ottenere foto più nitide.
A mio avviso avrei inserito la farfalla più a dx, avresti inoltre eliminato quel gambo alla dx del fotogramma.
Con bilanciamento colore, porta il rosso a +10, eliminerai quella lieve dominante cyano.
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| sent on January 19, 2014 (22:52) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)
Thanks for the valuable advice.
I really appreciate the comment as it is from this summer that I started to experiment with macros and figure out where you are wrong and how to improve it is not always easy.
In fact you're right, there is a cut on that. For the dominant cyan tell me how to try and see the result.
See you soon.
thanks ancora.ciao.
Grazie dei preziosi consigli.
Apprezzo molto il commento visto che è da questa estate che ho iniziato a cimentarmi con le macro e capire dove si sbaglia e come fare a migliorarsi non è sempre facile.
In effetti hai ragione, un taglio sulla detta ci sta. Per la dominante ciano proverò come mi dici e vedremo il risultato.
A presto.
grazie ancora.ciao.
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| sent on January 20, 2014 (0:28) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)
I modified it here ...
better? ecco l'ho modificata...
meglio? |
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