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MerlolreM - last version sent on December 15, 2013 (18:22) by Prof Chaos. 23 comments, 1058 views.

, Specie: Turdus merula

Versione migliorata del merlo che avevo postato in precedenza... E' stato un percorso mentale complesso, ma alla fine mi sono convinto che renda meglio più ambientata... ;-) http://www.juzaphoto.com/topic2.php?l=it&t=728241





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avatarsenior
sent on December 15, 2013 (18:37) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

really a great shot ..... nice ambietazione and also the reflection in the water ...... :-P:-P:-P:-P

avatarsenior
sent on January 18, 2014 (14:31) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

The image is well composed, the detachment of the plans and the focus given by a well-run diaphragm give a sense of three-dimensionality to shoot, but I see on the monitor but excessive sharpening the blackbird, I do not see it as a criticism, it might be also a factor in the resolution of my monitor ;-)
Personally, I would have deleted the shrubs in the lower left, leaving only the smallest (near the ground).
Mine is a personal taste, that which is not seen in a reflection in the real "To Me" is just a nuisance ;-)
There is also that if you answer that cancellanto almost all reflected the shrubs remained white photos and a bit 'anonymous, I can not blame you, as I have suggested, it's just a matter of taste :-)



avatarjunior
sent on January 18, 2014 (14:39) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

Hello Professor Chaos
Having been a participant in the blog where I did this initiative begin.
It is not easy for those who do little or nothing nature photography, especially in the field of bird, judging an image of this kind. So my judgment is primarily an aesthetic character. I do not like that large white area that occupies the lower two-thirds of the image, plus I find it quite annoying reflection of the twig in the corner on the left. I have always photographed with the SLR and then I find the 3:2 natural for me. Hardly suitable, even in crop the image in different formats. I tried instead to crop your foursquare in 1:1 format. Despite not adore this format I find that rebalance your image in a decisive manner. Again, a purely aesthetic judgment, and maybe even a little 'school.
Merealize that we must grow in this

ps you're already mipiace:-D

hello angel:-D

user14286
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sent on January 18, 2014 (14:45) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

I also agree on the best performance of the square format, definitely. Maybe a peletto too far off the blackbird ...

avatarsenior
sent on January 18, 2014 (14:54) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

But how dare you!!
You do not know who I am!!
:-D:-D:-D:-D:-D:-D:-D:-D
Treat ... :-D

Thanks for the steps.
The image made me not a little vex ... I tried several versions, cuts and sizes, and I finally got
to prefer this (thanks to work done by users on other forums).

Sandro (you did well to specify the name, otherwise I would have kept calling you "Cow":-D)
I understand the speech of the bush. If I delete it, embrace the suggestion of making it a cutting Angelo
square. But even if you do not the original of reflection, I think it serves to balance / frame / fill the image, therefore, always to gusto staff, I know that he will remain ... :-D

The potential strength of the image, in my opinion, the game is positive / negative of the subject.
Unfortunately, it is an image created by accident, not exposed properly and that I should serve for more
interesting developments in the future, hopefully ...

Sandro, the excess MDC is an unhealthy habit that I have acquired in the last year of attendance here on JuzaPhoto, which account to resolve within two months, completely changing my workflow in postproduction ... ;-)
You were good to detect and segnalarmelo. :-)

In order to create even more difficulties (but also for completeness, I am attaching two other versions that I preferred before this ... Handsetand patience (Angel, you'll appreciate that ...:-D:-D:-D):-D








Hello.
Andrea ... ;-)

Edit: thanks to you, Poison for the comment ... ;-)
I beg you, do not forget the "I peace" ...
:-D:-D:-D:-D:-D:-D:-D:-D:-D:-D:-D

avatarjunior
sent on January 18, 2014 (15:10) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

Well, well, well.
So if you wanted to play on the positive / negative image had to be departing in black and white. We remember how they were true negatives in color or is it just me too old?
And then eliminavi quelll'orribile marchiettowow! in the upper left that does not breathe the image.
Overall an image to keep in the depths of your hard drive and from time to time to see
I like the cut instead very long and narrow.

avatarsenior
sent on January 18, 2014 (15:18) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

I like the cut instead very long and narrow.

Ah, here I clearings ... :-D
In the b / w version I added a green filter (virtual, post) to lighten the background, a little '
as they did once during shooting ... I too am an old man ... :-D

For the brand, unfortunately I have to submit to taxation of my publisher, Alemat73, which controls ... :-|
:-D

avatarsenior
sent on January 18, 2014 (15:55) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

I subscribe for the brand as already shown in the previous comment of "Angelob" (takes so much breath to the image that the blackbird seems to look at him with the doubts about what to do ....:-D:-D:-D) and then I can not clone them! mail the photo with the logo placed on the white! :-D:-D:-D:-D:-D:-P
As for the cut, the format "Bookmark" does not convince me, I see it very suitable for a horizontal panorama, but a photo of nature gives me a feeling of incompleteness of the image :-(

avatarsenior
sent on January 18, 2014 (16:05) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

I can not clone

:-D:-D:-D
I have to send the raw? I would not want you too ... affaticassi :-D

but on a naturalistic picture gives me a feeling of incompleteness of the image

This is called creativity ...
Or mental imbalance? :-D

avatarsenior
sent on January 18, 2014 (16:09) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

I agree with the excessive contrast medium on the blackbird ... I too do not really like the white part .. at the end of the gaze is captured there ... ok for me as a cut just below the reflection of the blackbird.

avatarsenior
sent on January 18, 2014 (19:49) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

Thanks Eliana ... ;-)

I agree on the contrast agent, but does not fully understand this:
at the end of the gaze is caught there

In other words, my eyes just do not manage to stay on the white, but goes in search automatically or reflection
left at the bottom, or the blackbird in the water ...
Unless I have misunderstood ... :-|

However, I plan to something like groped further and propose it ...
Hello a todos ... :-D





avatarsenior
sent on January 18, 2014 (20:59) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

In the proposed picture of you think that the only thing I would do is cut at the height of the logo.
The rest I find it so perfect com ...

avatarsenior
sent on January 18, 2014 (21:26) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

Ok, Vigna, thanks for the tip ...
Hello ...
;-)

avatarsupporter
sent on January 18, 2014 (21:41) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

Beautiful set so personally bothers me a white part below, have you tried to cut off the lower frame?

greetings ale

avatarsenior
sent on January 18, 2014 (22:01) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

The thing that struck me most is the set, in my opinion as such could be more attention to detail ..
I find the wood chosen as suitable roost little and if I'm not mistaken it seems bought in a garden.
Am I wrong?

avatarsenior
sent on January 18, 2014 (22:04) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

Not much to add except that no disdegnerei the square cut.
Hello!

avatarsenior
sent on January 18, 2014 (22:17) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

Silo, err ... :-D
In other words, I agree that the set is not well done. I overlooked and I'll tell you more ... I have not noticed until one day, in a lively discussion with Luzzini not made me notice him ... It 's the same set used for the fools that I have in the galleries.
It is a small trunk of pear tree (dead), given to me by my uncle after he uprooted from his garden ...

Alexander and Barbara (but at this point even Vigna), the square cut seems too crush the double-blackbird ... Oppresses him too, as if in a cage ... I prefer to leave the white underneath to give him an escape route (I wonder if explained in this way you can understand what I mean ... :-|).

Thank you all for the steps.
I would not give the impressionsion not to give you a straight, but I assure you that on this photo (born by chance and wrong at the start) I've spent a very long time to try all possible combinations ... And in the end I came to prefer this version or the format vertical panoramic ...
I hope to offer something similar later with some improvement ...

Hello.
Andrea. ;-)


avatarsenior
sent on January 18, 2014 (22:24) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

:-D Ok .. wrong .. the origin :-|
Then it is a more natural ... but buried by a landslide ;-)
With sympathy uh .. no offense .. hihihi

avatarsenior
sent on January 18, 2014 (22:37) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

Did not you read the rules dell'Hastag # CircoloFotografico?
It is not allowed to be offended ...
;-)

avatarsenior
sent on January 18, 2014 (22:48) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

Prof, the eye is caught there in the sense that you look at the blackbird, but in the end that white distracts you, it bothers you. Like when the sun is completely burned in one shot: you try to look at the other elements, but in the end your eye is still there, on that only that catalyzes dazzling and disturbing. At least it happens to me as well .... :-(


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