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| sent on July 30, 2013 (13:31) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)
I posted this shot made some time ago because, although I like it, it has something that does not convince me and I can not figure out where.
To you then criticism Ho postato questo scatto fatto qualche tempo fa perchè, nonostante mi piaccia, ha qualcosa che non mi convince e non riesco a capire dove.
A voi quindi le critiche |
| sent on July 30, 2013 (14:24) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)
I find it good, I just lowered the level of light in raw to darken the whites "burned" too much of the background that divert the gaze from the subject, or trying a digital filter in post to increase the contrast of the subject, see as an example shoulder- neck in the foreground.
Hello Gazza Io la trovo buona, avrei solo abbassato il livello di luce in raw per scurire i bianchi "bruciati" dello sfondo che distolgono troppo lo sguardo dal soggetto, oppure provare un filtro digitale in post per aumentare il contrasto del soggetto, vedi come esempio spalla-collo in primo piano.
Ciao Gazza |
| sent on July 30, 2013 (18:59) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)
I would play on the blur of hair falling on his back, rendondoli sharper, help to remove the subject from the background.
Hello Hello Io giocherei sulla sfocatura dei capelli che cadono sulla schiena, rendondoli più nitidi, aiuterebbe a staccare maggiormente il soggetto dallo sfondo.
Ciao Ciao |
| sent on July 31, 2013 (7:54) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)
Thanks Gazza and Giokej,
in fact, the light burned in the background I kept that to bring focus toward the top of the picture where the model's face. At the same time, however, as I do see, "fallen" sharpness and contrast I'll try to work to make them more visible.
Roby Grazie Gazza e Giokej,
in effetti la luce bruciata sullo sfondo l'ho mantenuta tale per portare atenzione verso l'alto della foto dove si trova il viso della modella. Al contempo però come mi fate notare, sono "caduti" la nitidezza e contrasto che proverò a lavorare per renderli più visibili.
Roby |
| sent on August 12, 2013 (21:42) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)
Hello, I confirm, I also would have kept the background burnt to direct towards the face, beautiful light on the lips, not the one on the hand-wrist, which would selectively reduced, as it creates a detachment of sight between the trunk and the model's face. I do not know if you've tried to increase the contrast and sharpness of the hair, but I do not think that brings great benefits overall. Beautiful anyway! Ciao,confermo, anche io avrei tenuto lo sfondo bruciato per indirizzare verso il volto, bella la luce sulle labbra, meno quella sulla mano-polso, che avrei ridotto selettivamente, in quanto crea uno stacco visivo tra il tronco ed il viso della modella. Non so se hai già provato ad aumentare il contrasto e la nitidezza dei capelli, ma non credo che porti grandi benefici complessivi. Bella comunque! |
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