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| sent on May 22, 2013 (15:02) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)
is one of my first photos using a flash off camera, are very welcome positive criticism (I hope) but especially negative ones to improve.
Thanks é una delle mie prime foto utilizzando un flash off camera, sono molto gradite le critiche positive (lo spero) ma soprattutto quelle negative per migliorare. Grazie |
| sent on May 31, 2013 (10:49) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)
Hello Saimon, always ask great feedback :-) According to me: - Light too harsh, harsh shadows on the face and bright light. Judging by the hardness seems to me that you have not used a diffuser or a reflector, which I strongly recommend. If you did, you could keep more distant light. - If necessary, the same angled light but more distant, with diffuser + Fill Light on the dark side, maybe even a fixed lamp also improvised and why not colored (warm colors in this case). - So how can this be corrected in the post, but I think it is the sense of your exercise - Point of View, MAF and expression are great for me. Cordial greetings :-) Ciao Saimon, sempre ottimo chiedere riscontri Secondo me: - Luce troppo dura, ombre troppo nette sul viso e luce troppo forte. A giudicare dalla durezza mi pare che tu non abbia utilizzato un diffusore o un riflettore, cosa che ti consiglio vivamente. Se invece lo hai fatto, avresti potuto tenere più distante la luce. - Eventualmente, stessa luce angolata ma più distante, con diffusore + Luce di riempimento dal lato scuro, magari anche una lampada fissa anche improvvisata e perché no colorata (colori caldi in questo caso). - Così com'è la si potrebbe correggere in post, ma penso non sia il senso del tuo esercizio - Inquadratura, MAF ed espressione sono ottimi per me. Saluti cordiali |
| sent on June 03, 2013 (11:59) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)
Thanks for the advice I will try to put them into practice and to post new photos and achieve good results. Grazie per i consigli cercherò di metterli in pratica e di postare nuove foto e raggiungere dei buoni risultati. |
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