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sent on September 29, 2023 (21:58) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)
I find the subject a little too centralized, moreover the space behind him seems excessive and even the accentuated recognizability of the background does not seem to me to contribute to focusing attention on it. If you had moved one step to your left you would have succeeded, I believe, in positioning the butterfly in the left third, leaving the grass stems on the right third and giving the central third an excellent role as a balancer of the whole scene. I do not know what diaphragm you have used so that you do not bring it back but, if I could, I would have opened a little more precisely to allow the foreground to emerge from the background. But it is only my key to reading and worth the little it is worth. Hello, Paul. Trovo il soggetto un poco troppo accentrato, inoltre mi pare eccessivo lo spazio dietro di lui e anche la accentuata riconoscibilità dello sfondo non mi pare contribuisca a concentrare l'attenzione su di esso. Se ti fossi spostato di un passo verso la tua sinistra saresti riuscito, io credo, a posizionare la farfalla nel terzo di sinistra lasciando gli steli d'erba sul terzo di destra e attribuendo al terzo centrale un ottimo ruolo di equilibratore della scena tutta. Non so che diaframma tu abbia adoperato perché non lo riporti ma, potendo, avrei aperto un po' di più appunto per consentire al primo piano di emergere dallo sfondo. Ma è solo la mia chiave di lettura, e conta per il poco che vale. Ciao, Paolo.
sent on September 29, 2023 (22:18) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)
Thanks Paul, I will treasure your opinion. Unfortunately I shot with my smartphone because I made the mistake of leaving the camera at home. I find it my fault to think little in front of the scene. Grazie Paolo, farò tesoro della tua opinione. Purtroppo ho scattato con lo smartphone perché ho fatto l'errore di lasciare la macchina fotografica a casa. Trovo un mio difetto ragionare poco davanti alla scena.