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| sent on August 19, 2023 (13:38) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)
The photo I do not mind, the light directs the gaze on the model but I would have taken care of the composition differently (I would have taken the whole right leg removing a little' of space forward, but I realize that with an 85 mm it is difficult to manage the spaces).
Another detail, the gaze is directed on the face by the light but the ruined sleeve is still noticeable. It is a
constructive criticism and not a judgment, I hope it is appreciated :-)
Peppe
. La foto non mi dispiace,la luce indirizza lo sguardo sulla modella ma avrei curato diversamente la composizione (avrei preso tutta la gamba destra togliendo un po' di spazio avanti, ma mi rendo conto che con un 85 mm è difficile gestire gli spazi).
Altro dettaglio, lo sguardo è indirizzato sul volto dalla luce ma la manica rovinata comunque si nota.
È una critica costruttiva e non un giudizio, spero sia gradito :-)
Peppe
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| sent on August 19, 2023 (16:49) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)
We would miss it, indeed, thanks for the advice. :-D
I am well aware of some shortcomings in these photos, but they are taken during normal workouts in the gym. With the light I am also too lucky, since there is a window, directed to the west, which lets in a lot of light. As for the composition, the spaces are what they are, and with the 85 I don't even try to take the girls in full, for that I use a 35mm. Ci mancherebbe, anzi, grazie per i consigli. 
Sono ben consapevole di alcune mancanze in queste foto, ma sono scattate durante dei normali allenamenti in palestra. Con la luce sono anche troppo fortunato, essendoci un finestrone, indirizzato per giunta ad ovest, che di luce ne fa entrare molta. Per quanto riguarda la composizione, gli spazi sono quelli che sono, e con l'85 neanche ci provo a prendere le ragazze per intero, per quello uso un 35mm. |
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