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| sent on March 22, 2018 (7:51) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)
Nice picture, I like the light and the composition, I would have raised only slightly to fully resume the yellow flower.
Hello Simone Bella foto, mi piace per la luce e la composizione, mi sarei alzato solo lievemente da riprendere in toto il fiore giallo.
Ciao, Simone |
| sent on March 22, 2018 (10:07) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)
Hello, I dare to make a criticism that I hope can be constructive to improve!
I find the subject interesting but it is very very complicated to work with glass.
I think in this photo is wrong framing (when there is plenty of time to compose with the easel is good to be careful with the details) because it leaves out a part of the last petal: wanting to be I think your main subject disturbs enough.
I add that the direct light on the glass does not go, in fact there is a burned area and creates shadows that are too harsh: I suggest you try an indirect or repeated lighting (even from the same wall behind detaching the vase more) to enhance the subject in glass.
Greetings Ciao, mi permetto di fare una critica che spero possa essere costruttiva per migliorarsi!
Trovo interessante il soggetto ma è molto molto complicato lavorare con il vetro.
Credo che in questa foto sia sbagliata l'inquadratura (quando c'è tutto il tempo per comporre con il cavalletto è bene stare attenti ai particolari) perchè lascia fuori una parte dell'ultimo petalo: volendo essere credo il tuo soggetto principale disturba abbastanza.
Aggiungo che la luce diretta sul vetro non va, infatti c'è una zona bruciata e crea ombre troppo dure: ti consiglio di provare un'illuminazione indiretta ovvero ribattuta (anche dallo stesso muro dietro staccando di più il vaso) per esaltare il soggetto in vetro.
Saluti |
| sent on March 22, 2018 (11:14) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)
Hello Simone, in fact I can not blame you as if I had broken a certain continuity, in fact I have made others where I resumed as you say but unfortunately I cannoned the opening dramatically,
I thank you so much for your constructive criticism,
a greeting josep. Ciao Simone, in effetti non posso darti torto è come se avessi spezzato una certa continuità, in verità ne ho fatte altre dove ho ripreso come dici tu ma purtroppo ho cannato clamorosamente l'apertura,
ti ringrazio tantissimo per la tua critica costruttiva,
un saluto josep. |
| sent on March 22, 2018 (11:30) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)
Hi Stefano, as far as the framing is concerned, I realized the mistake, but the light would not have arrived,
all this stimulates me to repeat it again with the advice you kindly gave me
thanks again for the constructive criticism
a greeting Josep. Ciao Stefano, per quanto riguarda l'inquadratura mi sono reso conto dell'errore, ma la luce proprio non ci sarei arrivato,
tutto questo mi stimola a ripeterla nuovamente con i consigli che gentilmente mi hai dato
grazie ancora per la critica costruttiva
un saluto Josep. |
| sent on March 22, 2018 (11:31) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)
Imagine it is a pleasure to be able to help out for what I can humbly do! Figurati è un piacere poter dare una mano per quel che umilmente posso! |
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