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| sent on October 26, 2012 (23:27) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)
I reduced the top of the frame to just below the bra, lighting and 'to improve, especially with the background which would have benefited more contrast, and I would have tried more symmetry. The grain does not disturb evident. It would have been better to cut the labels of linen.
Overall nice image.
Hello. Avrei ridotto la parte alta del fotogramma fino ad appena sotto il reggiseno, l'illuminazione e' da migliorare, specialmente sullo sfondo con il quale avrebbe giovato maggiore contrasto, e avrei cercato maggiore simmetria. La grana evidente non disturba. Sarebbe stato meglio tagliare le etichette della biancheria.
Nel complesso immagine gradevole.
Ciao. |
| sent on October 26, 2012 (23:30) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)
you're right. I'm here to imparare.grazie hai ragione. sono qui per imparare.grazie |
| sent on October 27, 2012 (7:24) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)
`I fully agree with MR71. A warm greeting. Sono perfettamente d`accordo con Mr71. Un caro saluto. |
| sent on October 27, 2012 (9:52) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)
the two labels clash, the intersection of the band of the bra should be placed in the model and should not show signs of sitting or clothing. a light side would give more thickness to the composition detaching it from the bottom. eye and the folds of the cardboard that makes you the background (see the right side and spots on the left side)
hello le due etichette stonano, l'incrocio della fascetta del reggiseno doveva essere allineata e la modella non doveva presentare i segni di seduta o indumenti. una luce di lato avrebbe dato piu spessore alla composizione staccandola dal fondo. e occhio alle pieghe del cartone che ti fa da sfondo (vedi lato dx e macchie sul lato sx )
ciao |
| sent on October 27, 2012 (19:22) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)
also add to avoid titles like this, depleting the shot. IMHO. aggiungerei anche di evitare titoli come questo, impoveriscono lo scatto. IMHO. |
| sent on October 28, 2012 (9:48) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)
The warning labels.
Via the bra (even if the girl is not a pro, and shame, both from behind).
Angle wider downward, up to mid-thigh.
Watch for signs on the skin: you can see and ruin photos.
Higher contrast (different lighting).
Many compliments to the mother of the model!
Via le etichette.
Via il reggiseno (anche se la ragazza non è una pro, e si vergogna, tanto è di spalle).
Inquadratura più larga verso il basso, fino a metà coscia.
Attenzione ai segni sulla pelle: si vedono e rovinano la foto.
Maggiore contrasto (illuminazione diversa).
Tantissimi complimenti alla mamma della modella!
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| sent on October 28, 2012 (11:27) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)
I see the flat photo ... there is no gap between the model and the background (lighting to be reviewed)
vedo la foto piatta... non c'è stacco tra la modella e lo sfondo (illuminazione da rivedere)
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| sent on October 28, 2012 (19:40) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)
all constructive criticism for me, it was my first experience with a model and a lot of things have passed me by ..
perhaps more embarrassment on my part than his. per me tutte critiche costruttive, era la mia prima esperienza con una modella e molte cose mi sono sfuggite..
forse più imbarazzo da parte mia che sua. |
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