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Houseboat camp 2 - OLD sent on September 30, 2012 (16:05) by Cobarcore. 19 comments, 2591 views.

, 8 sec f/2.8, ISO 1600, tripod.

Grotfjord, Kvaloya, near Tromso (Norway). 3 March 2012, h 22.19 local time (UT+1). Canon 350D, Canon 15 mm f/2.8 (used open), 1600 ISO, 8 s exposure.





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avatarjunior
sent on October 03, 2012 (10:21) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

gorgeous!

avatarsenior
sent on October 03, 2012 (10:33) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

Beautiful aurora borealis, but there are some things to improve .., first thing in the composition, which absolutely rule out the branches that come out on the right, I would also correct the distortion due to the use of fisheye that disturbs me a little.
I also raised the brightness slightly to give a little more contrast.
Hello
Fabio

avatarsenior
sent on October 03, 2012 (10:48) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

Thanks for the comments!
For classes I could actually delete them in PS. It was a frame with a timelapse dolly and in that case were useful.
I correct the distortion, but maybe not enough. Idem put her back hand.
For brightness, I would not exaggerate to highlight the noise.
Lorenzo

avatarsenior
sent on October 03, 2012 (11:04) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

most beautiful aurora borealis, a bit of noise but we are working on that feeling. :-D

avatarsenior
sent on October 03, 2012 (11:05) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

Nice shot, the branches on the right disturb the composition a lot, in my opinion, has the house to non-optimal position.
As a frame taken from a timelapse I can imagine that the movie justifies both the branches that the central location of the house but as a single shot may not find it the ideal composition.
Always fascinating still shots like these.
hello

avatarsenior
sent on October 03, 2012 (15:38) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

without the house in the middle would have been better. The house is too prevail over everything else, and the centrality hinders the background that should be of interest.

avatarsenior
sent on October 03, 2012 (19:56) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

Thank you all for the comments that helped me to understand how to improve my (non-existent) sense of composition.
@ MHz, the noise is the struggle continues each night shot!
@ Beppe: in the TL with dolly, home to the multiplex is pretty good, but the branches are too marginal or I would have to put in as much or leave them out.
@ Vincent: I've done other homeless (they are in the galleries) but I find that the house gives a more human scale to the scene. I also like not, then I agree in part with your taste!

According to you, with the elements present there, as I could get better components?

avatarsupporter
sent on October 03, 2012 (22:52) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

Hello Lorenzo, I do not know the place from where you took but I would go on the left, trying to get the house right in the center of the frame to include the greater portion of the sky as possible. Is still a really beautiful shot. As I mentioned I also tried a shot at ISO 800 to curb noise and have a sky darker and contrasted ..... but I understand that having to catch the sunrise on the move you wanted to keep down time. Hello. ;-)

avatarsenior
sent on October 04, 2012 (9:19) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

Due North! Unfortunately I could not move to the right too because in addition to include more sky, I also included cameras and photographers traveling companions, just outside the field to the right.
Noise unfortunately there is not much to do, the dawn is fast and requires a short time, then higher iso. The only use is fullframe cameras and modern, with a few megapixels.

avatarsenior
sent on October 04, 2012 (12:28) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

I understand that you did not have much room to move without including additional elements of disorder, not knowing the real alternative then I would think a shot in vertical format where to place the home on the third including a greater portion of the sky.
The twigs were right to avoid.
hello

avatarsenior
sent on October 04, 2012 (23:05) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

I tried to make use of your advice, as far as possible (I could not go back there to redo the picture!:-D)
I removed the twigs, and correct the residual distortion of the fisheye that was left.

Other than that I tried to make a light crop. More my conscience does not allow amateur, cut off the Pleiades! How do you think?

Nocrop




Crop



avatarsenior
sent on October 05, 2012 (0:34) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

Without the branches is much better, I have no doubt.
It leaves me rather doubts the crop. Below is little land and I do not like it at all, the house is distributed better, but that rock on the right hour check from almost nothing and becomes distracting.
I would leave without crop the photo, if you want to decentralize a little 'home do not have to remove from below but from above, which is a shame as the show there.
hello

avatarsenior
sent on October 05, 2012 (7:20) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

always fascinating sunrise, good result

avatarsenior
sent on October 05, 2012 (9:48) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

Beppe Thank you for the advice, really valuable! Your Constructive criticism is gold for me.
I will try to make a new version of the crop, although as I probably should not write.

@ Andrew: thank you!

avatarsenior
sent on October 08, 2012 (20:39) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

I've updated the galleries, moving this in "Old versions".
The new version is here: www.juzaphoto.com/galleria.php?l=it&cat=singola&t=255274
Thank you all for the comments that have allowed us to improve!

avatarsupporter
sent on November 18, 2013 (0:57) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

Very beautiful!
Yes, the vertical shutter release would be a good idea.
However, without branches is much better.

avatarsenior
sent on November 18, 2013 (9:43) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

Thanks Tessi!

Just a reminder: I invite all comments and discussion to continue in the new version:
www.juzaphoto.com/galleria.php?l=it&cat=singola&t=255274

avatarsenior
sent on November 18, 2013 (10:03) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

urcawow! wow! wow!

avatarsenior
sent on November 18, 2013 (10:55) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

Reminder: I invite all comments and discussion to continue in the new version:
www.juzaphoto.com/galleria.php?l=it&cat=singola&t=255274




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