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Daydreams sent on January 03, 2017 (12:04) by AleCs72. 18 comments, 583 views. [retina]

, 1/50 f/2.0, ISO 12800, hand held.




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user90373
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sent on April 17, 2017 (13:30) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

The dreamy expression is all, perhaps the part of fuzzy pillow is a tad cumbersome. I tried a tilt adjustment of 10 ° clockwise and reassembling sense. Also I would try a B / W facing the highs, which should adapt well to the "dream". A greeting. :-)

user81826
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sent on April 17, 2017 (17:52) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)


user81257
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sent on April 17, 2017 (19:10) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

I could tell you that the tone is low contrast, but it all depends on what you wanted to achieve.
The title suggests it to me.
So the muted tones are there, make the delicate picture.
The look is very intense, perhaps accentuated by the fact that only half a face is visible.
The bokeh is delicious behind.
Get tips on how to improve? Dartene I do not know, but I tell you that this portrait is very successful in my opinion.

avatarsenior
sent on April 17, 2017 (20:43) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

The only thing I do not like is the area of ??focus in the foreground, otherwise a fine portrait :-)
dv

avatarsenior
sent on April 17, 2017 (21:24) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

Beautiful shot and even blurred in the foreground I really like. Only note perhaps the picture suffers a bit 'of camera shake because the shutter speed is fast enough. Compliments

avatarsenior
sent on April 17, 2017 (21:40) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

Thank you all for the comments, always useful ler improve technique.
I really like the blurred by 135, the photo was taken at sunset and I liked the idea of ??the low light that filters through the curtain with horizontal stripes.
The post production was little, I lowered a little sharpness to emphasize the dreamy effect; my daughters are accustomed to seeing me around the house in search of inspiration when I have new lenses, so now we do not notice, the pose is natural and not forced.
I would have liked a little more brings out the eye, but I did not use Photoshop, and levels.

avatarsenior
sent on April 17, 2017 (22:37) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

The title of the message arrives. On b / n, they are of little help, because I have embraced 100% color philosophy. I can tell you that seeing one eye sdubbia me a little. Moreover one eye visible stands out very little. It looks like a black button. It has not the least of three dimensions and significance. The area of ??the fuzzy pillow is very cumbersome ... I think too much. The post, but here you get into a subjective field, is little, very little countered grigissima ... I see ... but I think the effect that you wanted to give him. I ventured a more aggressive cut putting out the eye, leaving the viewer to imagine the scene of the dream ...

avatarsupporter
sent on April 18, 2017 (0:42) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

I find it nice shot, well done, personally I would have dropped the third eye on the right, I understand your composition but I see too pillow ....

avatarsenior
sent on April 18, 2017 (8:33) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

I see a little too cuscino..a level of development like I only increased the brightness so it is too flat Po. I understand however, that ISO 12800 in the grain would become more conspicuous. However, a good half portrait :-D

avatarsenior
sent on April 18, 2017 (8:39) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

I'll try to edit the photo with your suggestions, are now out of work x ... then I will let you see the result ;-)

avatarsenior
sent on April 18, 2017 (8:41) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

For me the cushion in the foreground is too cumbersome. Interesting choice of the central eye, but I tried to put it on third down right: the area behind the subject, which has a beautiful blurred, helps the pillow to give the idea of ??the dream.

avatarsenior
sent on April 18, 2017 (11:36) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

The idea is nice but to be developed, the pillow is really too invasive. Black and white a little dark.
A good time to get better value daily intimacy, perhaps with a cut more determined that eliminates much of the blur in the foreground.

user90373
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sent on April 18, 2017 (11:46) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

Allow me to propose an amendment, in line with the views expressed in my first comment, which as usual after while I'm going to take off. A greeting. :-)






avatarsenior
sent on April 18, 2017 (13:17) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

Thanks Hector, do not remove the comment is fine

user72446
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sent on April 18, 2017 (15:03) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

The photo of her I think is successful, but 'emotionally tells me little!

avatarsenior
sent on April 24, 2017 (0:17) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

I really like between bokeh and look .... I share the fact that there is too much "cushion". But definitely well managed

avatarsenior
sent on April 26, 2017 (22:46) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

beautiful portrait genuine, congratulations for the steady hand!
the grain given by ISO 12800 I really like, it seems sought!
perhaps the BN find it too .. gray, I would have preferred more closed and deep blacks!

avatarsenior
sent on April 26, 2017 (23:57) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

Thanks Alf, thanks Peppe :-)



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