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| sent on August 24, 2017 (21:23) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)
Nice the effect of light that illuminates only half the subject, with a fantastic expression! The development, however, seems to have come a bit dark, both for the wall in the background and for the right side of the face. I would try to increase the contrast much, almost to get a low key effect. Bello l'effetto della luce che illumina solo metà soggetto, con un'espressione fantastica! Lo sviluppo però mi sembra venuto un po' scuro, sia per la parete sullo sfondo che per la parte destra del viso. Proverei ad aumentare molto il contrasto, quasi ad ottenere un effetto low key. |
| sent on August 24, 2017 (21:45) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)
The black background and part of the face in the shade are actually looking for though maybe you're right and it's worth trying with some different adjustments lo sfondo nero e parte del viso in ombra in realtà sono cercati però forse hai ragione e vale la pena provare con qualche regolazione diversa |
| sent on August 24, 2017 (21:45) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)
The shot is not bad. What does not convince me is all that black between the subject and the edge of the cave?
Already you put it in place I would have moved it slightly to the left, so fill the gap and find out what lies behind your head.
Since it is so composed, I would just light up all that black, and even part of the face in the shade. Lo scatto non è malvagio. Quello che non mi convince è tutto quel nero tra il soggetto ed il bordo della grotta?
Già che l'hai messo in posa lo avrei spostato leggermente a sinistra, sì la colmare il divario e scoprire quello che cela dietro la testa.
Visto che è composta così, schiarirei appena appena tutto quel nero, ed anche parte della faccia in ombra. |
| sent on August 24, 2017 (23:15) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)
Actually she was not at all posing, she was in her seat on her stool on our stool while we were in with her family and every now and then she looked. It was a very large straw house and mud with only two light streets. This door and a door on the back that came though did not come to illuminate him and all the shots made there were made in natural light.
Black is a lot, I agree with you, but the other tests I made a bit clearer did not convince me a lot but maybe seeing them at a distance of temp ... you might be right. In realtà non era affatto in posa era al suo posto sull'uscio di casa sul suo sgabello mentre stavamo dentro con la sua famiglia e ogni tanto guardava. Era una casa di paglia e fango molto grande con due sole vie di luce .. questa porta e una porta sul retro che però arrivava non arrivava ad illuminare lui e tutti gli scatti fatti li sono stati fatti in luce naturale.
Il nero e' molto, concordo con te, ma le altre prove che avevo fatto un po' più chiare non mi convincevano molto però magari rivedendole a distanza di temp.... potresti avere ragione. |
| sent on August 24, 2017 (23:22) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)
From a light blinking, just to glimpse the plot. Nothing exaggerated. Dagli una leggerissima schiarita, solo ad intravedere la trama. Niente di esagerato. |
| sent on August 24, 2017 (23:24) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)
Very nice shot, then the side light in the portraits I like very much, great b & w. Maybe I would cut that lit up piece because it distracts a bit from the main subject. Scatto molto bello, poi la luce laterale nei ritratti mi piace tantissimo, ottimo b&w. Forse taglierei quella parte illuminata a sx perché distrae un po' dal soggetto principale. |
| sent on August 25, 2017 (1:11) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)
B / n great. The contrast I think of being shot at personality. I find the side light pleasant. B/n ottimo. Il contrasto secondo me da personalità allo scatto. Trovo gradevole la luce laterale. |
| sent on August 25, 2017 (6:25) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)
I would only give a slight lightening and clone off that object to the left near the rocks that disturb a little,
Great shots compliments :-) darei solo una leggera schiarita e clonerei via quell'oggetto a sinistra vicino le rocce che disturba un poco,
ottimo scatto complimenti  |
| sent on August 25, 2017 (7:26) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)
Thanks to all the comments, I will try to lighten and see what effect it does. Grazie a tutti dei commenti, provero' a schiarire e vedo che effetto fa . |
| sent on August 25, 2017 (8:57) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)
Other possibility was to completely shake off the illuminated part and get it out of the dark, it would have been interesting, to me the left side of the light photo annoys a bit ' altra possibilità era escudere totalmente la parte illuminata e farlo uscire dal buio, sarebbe stata comunque interessante, a me la parte sinistra della foto chiara infastidisce un po' |
user72446 | sent on August 25, 2017 (10:36) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)
Beautiful the effect of light on the face, I would have more emphasized the subject leaving less room on the left. Cmq I like it Bello l'effetto della luce sul volto, avrei valorizzato di più il soggetto lasciando meno spazio sulla sinistra. Cmq mi piace |
| sent on August 25, 2017 (16:05) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)
The composition seems to me very good, there is a lot left on the left but the eye is impressed with the face. The lights were used well!
Maybe the too dark takes off some detail from the bottom, see what's coming out brightening a bit! La composizione mi sembra molto buona,c'è tanto spazio a sinistra ma l'occhio è ben colpito dal volto. Le luci sono state usate bene!
Forse il troppo scuro toglie qualche dettaglio dal fondo, vedi cosa viene fuori schiarendo un po'! |
| sent on August 25, 2017 (16:37) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)
Thanks to everyone in the passage, maybe brightening I can contextualize a bit even if that face clatter that comes out I like it very much Grazie a tutti del passaggio, forse schiarendo riesco a contestualizzare un po' anche se quello spicchio di volto che esce fuori mi piace molto |
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