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| sent on May 24, 2016 (22:49) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)
The photo I really like in composition, but there are some things to be reviewed in my opinion: the rocks / I lit stairs as little as possible because they distract from what I think is the focal point of the shot, or the bivouac. The hearth has instead a perfect show that benefits to the overall atmosphere. Also, I think you're focused only bivouac. If that were the case I would recommend you the next time to make a shot with the bivouac in focus, and a second picture with the sky on fire and then put them together with photoshop. Excuse the comment long, but I wanted to share my ideas to maybe help you improve further (I'll tell you as a photographer to its beginnings, so arrogantly 0) :-D La foto mi piace molto per composizione, ma ci sono alcune cose da rivedere a mio parere: le rocce/scale le avrei illuminate il meno possibile perché distraggono da ciò che secondo me è il punto focale dello scatto, ovvero il bivacco. Il focolare ha invece una esposizione perfetta che giova all'atmosfera complessiva. Inoltre, penso che tu abbia messo a fuoco solo il bivacco. Se così fosse ti consiglierei la prossima volta di fare uno scatto con il bivacco a fuoco, e un secondo scatto con il cielo a fuoco per poi metterli assieme con photoshop. Scusa il commento lunghissimo ma volevo condividere le mie idee per magari aiutarti a migliorare ancora (te lo dico da fotografo agli inizi proprio, quindi 0 arroganza)  |
| sent on May 25, 2016 (10:28) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)
First of all thank you for the constructive criticism, I prefer a thousand times to a 'pretty picture'. As you say in this photo I so enlightened the 'stairs' because I liked the effect that the light had on the rock, but unfortunately ends up distracting from the real subject, so I agree in full! As for the fire instead I waited until there were only the embers so they do not burn, excuse the pun, the -D lights
If I remember instead the focus was set to infinity and therefore should be all on fire, maybe the stars appear blurred for too long exposure.
Thanks again for sharing your ideas! Prima di tutto grazie mille per la critica costruttiva, la preferisco mille volte a un 'bella foto'. Come dici tu in questa foto ho illuminato tanto le 'scale' perché mi piaceva l'effetto che la luce aveva sulla roccia, ma purtroppo finisce per distrarre dai veri soggetti, perciò concordo a pieno! Per quanto riguarda il fuoco invece ho aspettato che ci fossero solamente le braci in modo che non bruciasse, scusa il gioco di parole, le luci
Se non ricordo male invece la messa a fuoco era impostata su infinito e perciò dovrebbe essere tutto a fuoco, forse le stelle sembrano sfocate per l'esposizione troppo lunga.
Grazie ancora per aver condiviso le tue idee! |
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