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The access...

bianconerogrigio

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The access sent on October 26, 2014 (17:58) by Averroè. 14 comments, 573 views.

, 1/200 f/7.1, ISO 250, hand held.




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avatarsenior
sent on June 06, 2017 (10:51) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

It's not bad just because it lacks something, everything drives us to a door that is pretty dark without information, so it does not really tell me much about it, I do not find the subject of the photo or the tale

avatarjunior
sent on June 06, 2017 (11:00) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

The idea of ??the dark door was just that of a "mysterious" passage, but in fact, something that creates the atmosphere is missing: - /

avatarsenior
sent on June 06, 2017 (11:38) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

Perhaps, a hand sticking on the door frame ... or even a person who enters or exits would have a strong impact on the photo, which remains technically well executed, is pleasing to me. It lacks a thread of contrast but perhaps it was over. She misses something to excel, a whim

avatarsenior
sent on June 06, 2017 (11:41) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

Vertical lines straighten with a click in PS, I do not see any problems. Very classic composition, good black and white.
From the point of view of content I agree with you, the idea comes but the image lacks atmosphere, the architectures are severe but not overly "Gothic" and the scene is still too bright to convey some anxiety: what Is beyond the door does not look particularly mysterious but just underneath.

avatarjunior
sent on June 06, 2017 (14:52) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

Surely there is a little mystery, but I come to who tells me that a subject of some kind is needed. However technically it is well done (the B / W is very good) and I find it very pleasing, but "missing" a certain quid here.

avatarsenior
sent on June 06, 2017 (17:30) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

Excellent symmetries and gray scale, for example in the dim light of the door there was a figure like a monk would have been 10!


avatarjunior
sent on June 06, 2017 (21:50) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

The photo is well-composed and the development in black and white is well-weighted. The lines that trace the colonnade give the right depth to the door. But as the others say, the wicked keep them. The conclusion is missing. If instead of the jar on the right half-colonnade there was a half-hidden person, it would have been great. The light and the construction are still great. Just as a personal opinion, I see these photos of this kind with a nice big push, a 10mm for example.

user90373
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sent on June 07, 2017 (9:03) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

I would see it vertically, without the columns in the foreground. In place of the person who is not there and who would make another photo, I would propose a post-product artifact to simulate the fiery light of a candle, over there, in the dark.

avatarjunior
sent on June 08, 2017 (10:22) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

Technique: Composition that is but not valued, maybe a vertical photo would have been better. Beautiful toned.
Content: It would be indicative, you do not understand what you want to communicate or tell!

avatarjunior
sent on June 08, 2017 (18:25) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

Guys really thank you for your comments made me understand what was not convincing me and what could I change to improve it ... I'm afraid I'll do it as soon as possible :-D
PS: I also have the vertical version, but I do not like it, there are too much floor and ceiling and nothing gains in yielding: - /

avatarsenior
sent on June 08, 2017 (22:37) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

I did a similar photo a while ago and I think something is missing ... a human element.
Seeing you I'm even more convinced.
A vertical cut would have been better in my opinion.
Geometry is not bad as well as the Bianconero ;-)

avatarsenior
sent on June 09, 2017 (17:53) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

Technically I like black and white very well cared for and well contrasted, a bit less composition. With regard to the latter I would have preferred vertical cut in such a way as to accentuate more vertical lines and not cut the bases of the columns.

As far as the content is concerned I do not know where to focus and look at a message, the lights and shadows in the arcades are always beautiful, but in this photo are only in the background so I do not see them as a protagonist ...

user81826
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sent on June 11, 2017 (18:35) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

Light and geometry are masterful with a b / n a little dramatic.
I find it a good idea, it sends anxiety from the past years of dramatic Italian films, those old-fashioned films without a soundtrack, a typical shot that precedes shooting inside the building, I believe a sacristy or a church.
For me there is a great atmosphere but the picture is a bit dark and there is missing an element that leads the reading if it wants to work as a click.

avatarsenior
sent on June 11, 2017 (19:09) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)

Can I consider it an architectural photo? I'm sorry you did not correct the geometries.
In addition, the black spot, without any details that forms exactly at the center of the frame, blocks the eye movement that does not look for anything else. If it is not an architectural photo, then it misses that extra something that would give a bit of force to the shot.



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