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| sent on October 03, 2017 (15:01) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)
The shot seems a bit tight, I almost feel like banging on the boat that gives me a certain impression of choking.
I think if I had framed the wider, giving more breath to the scene, everything would be improved. You're a bit exaggerated with saturation, especially on the blue and then on the green; the shadow right on the boat is not connected to anything visible and annoys a bit.
Finally, looking at it in high resolution I see strange artifacts on the sky perhaps due to pp too pushed, I also see signs of popping on the sensor. L'inquadratura mi sembra un po' stretta, ho quasi l'impressione di sbattere contro la barca che mi restituisce una certa impressione di soffocamento.
Credo se se avessi inquadrato più largo, dando maggior respiro alla scena, tutto sarebbe migliorato. Hai un po' esagerato con la saturazione, soprattutto sul blu e poi anche sul verde; l'ombra a destra sulla barca non è collegata a nulla di visibile ed infastidisce un po'.
Infine, guardandola in alta risoluzione vedo degli strani artefatti sul cielo forse dovuti a pp troppo spinta, vedo anche dei segni si porco sul sensore. |
user90373 | sent on October 03, 2017 (15:16) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)
After trying, I would feel like I would venture a square format (1: 1) from the top left corner to extend, proportionally, to the lower edge of the border of the blurred palette. Try to see. :-or Dopo aver provato, mi sentirei di azzardare un formato quadro (1:1) a partire dall'angolo Sx in alto da estendere, proporzionalmente, fino al bordo inferiore al limitar del paletto sfocato. Provare per vedere.  |
| sent on October 04, 2017 (16:00) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)
I personally find the composition somewhat confused, with the cut boat that tends to choke the rest, maybe a few millimeters less and a step back would have returned a fair balance (I say maybe because maybe you lost what you wanted to convey). Technically, I think it is too sharp (hard light does not help) and maybe slightly too saturated (the green of the taxes or I find a little disturbing) Personalmente trovo la composizione leggermente confusa, con la barca tagliata che tende a soffocare tutto il resto, Forse qualche mm in meno ed un passo indietro avrebbero restituito un giusto equilibrio (dico forse, perchè magari si perdeva ciò che volevi trasmetterci). Tecnicamente, mi pare davvero troppo nitida (la luce durissima non aiuta) e forse leggermente troppo satura (il verde delle imposte o trovo un po' disturbante) |
| sent on October 06, 2017 (11:58) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)
@Ettore I'm sorry thanks for the precious suggestion
@Ettore Perazzetta grazie per il prezioso suggerimento
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| sent on October 06, 2017 (12:31) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)
@Maserc thanks.
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@Alexmi grazie. |
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