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| sent on May 01, 2015 (21:22) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)
Thanks Bruno !! ;-);-) Grazie Bruno!! |
| sent on May 08, 2015 (23:26) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)
A series really nice
this step and 'what struck me the most'
congratulations
greet Samuel
Una serie davvero bella
questo scatto e' quello che mi ha colpito di piu'
complimenti
un saluto Samuele
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| sent on May 08, 2015 (23:53) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)
I'll be strange but in this picture I see anything but a good composition, excuse my frankness ...
The two mills, which I consider to be the subjects of the photos as they are the main features of the place, they "lose" a lot in the frame you want to use a wide-angle focal length that tends to create depth in the image and to remove the background from first floor, because you want the grass and reeds on the right partially covering the second mill, or because a boat I completely shearing the basis of the first.
There is much empty space on the left and my eye is constantly distracted from the barrels on the right.
Well, frankly, I can not find balance in the composition.
Being able to repeat the shot, personally I would try:
- To utilize a longer focal length, not so, I would say to the eye between 24mm and 45mm to give more importance to the mills in the picture;
- Remove distractions, I always refer to the reeds on the right that are not functional to the composition;
- Use the boat, not for cutting a mill, but to guide the eye towards it, placing it to the left in the frame;
- Search for your lighting condition more interesting (but I know that the road is not always possible).
This is my analysis, I hope to not have seemed arrogant or know-it-because it is not my intention, I'm nobody and so I say just what I would have done it for you and I hope that this analysis (if correct) can help us both to grow photographically , definitelyrather than the classic "good" or "beautiful" you are fine, but do not help to improve.
Greetings
Stefano
PS: I know that talking about and realize the error in photos is made much easier, myself errors composition I realize too late (at home on PC -D) Sarò strano io ma in questa foto vedo tutto tranne che una buona composizione, scusate la franchezza...
I due mulini, che ritengo essere i soggetti della foto in quanto sono gli elementi caratterizzanti del luogo, si "perdono" parecchio nel frame vuoi per l'utilizzo di una focale grandangolare che tende a creare profondità nell'immagine e ad allontanare lo sfondo dal primo piano, vuoi perche l'erba e le canne sulla destra coprono parzialmente il secondo mulino, vuoi perché una barca mi trancia completamente la base del primo.
C'è molto spazio vuoto sulla sinistra e il mio occhio viene continuamente distratto dalle canne sulla destra.
Insomma, francamente non riesco a trovare equilibrio nella composizione.
Potendo ripetere lo scatto, personalmente proverei:
- ad utilizzare una focale più lunga, neanche tanto, ad occhio direi tra i 24mm e i 45mm per dare più importanza ai mulini nella foto;
- rimuovere gli elementi di distrazione, mi riferisco sempre alle canne sulla destra che non sono funzionali alla composizione;
- usare la barca, non per tranciare un mulino, ma per guidare lo sguardo verso esso, posizionandola più a sinistra nel frame;
- cercare una condizione di luce più interessante (ma so che in viaggio non é sempre possibile).
Questa é la mia analisi, spero di non essere sembrato presuntuoso o saputello perché non é mia intenzione, non sono nessuno e quindi ti dico quello semplicemente avrei fatto io al posto tuo e spero che questa analisi (se corretta) possa aiutarCI entrambi a crescere fotograficamente, sicuramente più che il classico "bella" o "stupenda" che si, vanno bene, ma non aiutano a migliorare.
Saluti
Stefano
PS: sono consapevole che parlare e rendersi conto degli errori a foto fatta é molto più semplice, io stesso di errori di composizione me ne accorgo troppo tardi (a casa sul pc  ) |
| sent on May 09, 2015 (8:12) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)
Thanks Lucky !! Grazie Lucky!! |
| sent on May 09, 2015 (8:13) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)
Be Stefano is your point of view !!! Be Stefano è un tuo punto di vista!!! |
| sent on May 09, 2015 (8:15) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)
I have immortalized the moment that I walked past the eyes and as such I think it is great the mill you see him, the boat moving and there is a reflection, I think there is everything !!! Io ho immortalato l'istante che mi è passato davanti gli occhi e come tale lo ritengo ottimo il mulino lo si vede;la barca da movimento e vi è il riflesso,mi sembra ci sia tutto!!! |
| sent on June 27, 2015 (10:24)
Absolutely beautiful! |
| sent on June 27, 2015 (13:58) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)
Thanks Dassielhh !!! Grazie Dassielhh!!! |
| sent on June 28, 2015 (17:05) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)
Great scenery, beautiful colors
A greeting
Paul Ottimo paesaggio, bellissimi colori
Un saluto
Paolo |
| sent on June 28, 2015 (18:21) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)
Thanks Paul !!! Grazie Paolo!!! |
| sent on October 04, 2015 (11:59) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)
very beautiful. Congrats molto bella, complimenti |
| sent on October 04, 2015 (12:09) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)
Thanks Claudio !! Grazie Claudio!! |
| sent on October 04, 2015 (12:23) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)
Always great cleaning in your excellent compositions Alessio !! :-) Wow! Sempre grande pulizia nelle tue ottime composizioni Alessio!!  |
| sent on October 04, 2015 (12:25) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)
Lamberto thanks !!! ;-) ;-) Grazie Lamberto!!! |
| sent on September 16, 2016 (10:49) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)
Wonderful composition, excellent dei.colori sharpness and I like the amche luce.complimenti Meravigliosa composizione, ottima la nitidezza dei.colori e mi piace amche la luce.complimenti |
| sent on September 16, 2016 (11:01) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)
And 'relaxing and enjoyable.
Beautiful.
Hello
E' rilassante e piacevole.
Bella.
Ciao
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| sent on September 16, 2016 (11:56) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)
kudos for really nice and impressive shooting.
Francis ;-) complimenti per lo scatto davvero bello e suggestivo.
Francesco |
| sent on September 16, 2016 (12:36) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)
it was not for the mills I would remember my Mississippi.
really beautiful, congratulations! non fosse per i mulini mi ricorderebbe il mio Mississippi.
davvero bella, complimenti! |
| sent on September 16, 2016 (14:28) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)
Thank you all ;-) ;-) Grazie tutti voi |
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