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| sent on December 16, 2015 (19:24) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)
Hello Marco :-) The sharpness is excellent, colors faithful and I think this is an advantage, focus and blurred just as good. What is missing is perhaps a little 'strength in terms of composition: the only thing left for you to do, as in Namibia guess you can not go back :-P; groped is unusual, but not wrong, square composition by cutting the space above your head, being a close-up, just by the pictures :-)
Lawrence
PS: also disturb those elements that appear on the right, looking to throw an eye during shooting .. After all this it does not seem to be a shot "stolen", the next time you take your time and evaluate all ;-) Ciao Marco La nitidezza è ottima, i colori fedeli e penso che questo sia un vantaggio, messa a fuoco e sfocato altrettanto buoni. Quello che manca è forse un po' di forza a livello di composizione: l'unica cosa che ti resta da fare, visto che in Namibia immagino tu non ci possa tornare ; è di tentare un'insolita, ma non per questo sbagliata, composizione quadrata tagliando quello spazio sopra la testa che, essendo un primo piano, poco da alla foto lorenzo P.S.: disturbano anche quegli elementi che compaiono sulla destra, cerca di buttarci un occhio in fase di scatto.. In fondo questo non sembra essere uno scatto "rubato", la prossima volta fai con calma e valuta tutto |
| sent on December 17, 2015 (9:52) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)
Hello Lorenzo, thanks, good constructive criticism that will surely keep in consideration. The portrait is just in my "ropes", even though she was always a great observer, definitely I have to learn so much. on framing square I had thought! but also on the fact of being shot is not conventional.
Thank you again, I'll put the other hoping to be better technically Ciao Lorenzo, grazie , ottima critica costruttiva che sicuramente terrò in considerazione. Il ritratto è da poco nelle mie "corde", pur essendone sempre stato un grandissimo osservatore, sicuramente devo imparare tanto. sull'inquadratura quadrata ci avevo pensato! ma anche sul fatto di essere un'inquadratura non convenzionale. Grazie ancora,ne metterò altre sperando siano migliori tecnicamente |
| sent on December 17, 2015 (11:09) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)
Sisi understand you, here on the forum, there are many good portraitists (not one of those unfortunately) where you can get ideas for cuts and so on, one for all is Alessandro Bergamini [URL =] www.juzaphoto.com /me.php?l=it&p=9971
Lawrence Sisi ti capisco, qui sul forum ci sono molti bravi ritrattisti (non sono tra quelli purtroppo) da cui puoi prendere spunto per tagli e quant'altro, uno su tutti è Alessandro Bergamini www.juzaphoto.com/me.php?l=it&p=9971 lorenzo |
| sent on December 17, 2015 (12:01) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)
Ah, I know him well ...... :-) Ah lo conosco bene...... |
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