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| sent on November 02, 2017 (22:33) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)
Hi Rave11i, I came across your galleries and I find your portraits beautiful. However, I allow some suggestion, although I do not feel authoritative, as I'm not a professional.
This shot I like for the light and the pose of the model, but I would have composed it by placing the subject on the other side of the frame, leaving more space on the side of her face than on the back of her neck.
I would have avoided cutting the upper part of the hair, giving a little more air, the same thing for the left arm too much to the margin of the frame. Finally, the chair, either visible in its upper part or completely erased it: I do not like to see a piece on the right and one on the left.
I hope that more authoritative authors will intervene with whom I also confront myself in my suggestions.
Hello Sergio Ciao Rave11i, mi sono imbattuto nelle tue gallerie e trovo belli i tuoi ritratti. Tuttavia, mi permetto qualche suggerimento, anche se non mi sento autorevole, in quanto non sono un professionista.
Questo scatto mi piace per la luce e la posa della modella, però lo avrei composto ponendo il soggetto dall'altra parte del fotogramma, lasciando più spazio, dal lato del suo viso, piuttosto che dalla parte della nuca.
Avrei evitato di tagliare la parte superiore dei capelli, concedendo un poco più aria, stessa cosa per il braccio sinistro troppo al margine del fotogramma. Infine la sedia, o visibile in tutta la sua parte superiore o cancellarla del tutto: non mi piace se ne veda un pezzo a destra ed uno a sinistra.
Spero intervengano autori più autorevoli con i quali confrontarmi anch'io nei miei suggerimenti.
Ciao
Sergio |
| sent on November 05, 2017 (22:19) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)
Thank you so much Sergio. I have read this suggestion and also the other and I have to say I found them very valid. At the next portrait I will adopt your advice, thank you very much! I'm happy to understand and learn to be able to improve and I find the Juza community very useful for this.
Thanks again.
A greeting Grazie mille Sergio. Ho letto questo suggerimento e anche l'altro e devo dire che li ho trovati molto validi. Al prossimo ritratto adotterò i tuoi consigli, grazie mille! Sono contenta di capire e imparare per poter sempre migliorare e trovo molto utile la community di Juza per questo.
Grazie ancora.
Un saluto |
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