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user5755 | sent on June 21, 2012 (11:04) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)
Not being an expert of the genre, I consider the composition as we see with my own eyes. I do not like the background but mostly I do not like the look of my favorite subject, in pictures such as this, direct target for the light and enhance the expression. The B / W I think it is well managed although the shade of hair on the face could be solved with a stroke a camera flash or light diffuser, nice cutting. Hello Marco Non essendo espertissimo del genere, giudico la composizione per come la vedono i miei occhi. Non mi piace lo sfondo ma soprattutto non mi piace lo sguardo del soggetto che preferisco, in foto come questa, dirette all'obiettivo per valorizzarne la luce e l'espressione. Il B/N lo ritengo ben gestito anche se l'ombra dei capelli sul volto poteva essere risolto con un colpo di flash o luce da diffusore, gradevole il taglio. Ciao Marco |
| sent on June 21, 2012 (11:49) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)
Thank you for the comment. Ti ringrazio per il commento. |
| sent on October 26, 2012 (17:29) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)
A good place to start. Certainly be improved, right now, with a background less damaged / wrinkled and a composition that does not leave all that space between the head and the top edge of the picture (in the space falls only in the folds of the seabed that not only add nothing of value to the photo but detract from the success). ;) A greeting! Un buon punto di partenza. Sicuramente migliorabile, nell'immediato, con uno sfondo meno rovinato/spiegazzato ed una composizione che non lascia tutto quello spazio tra testa e bordo superiore delle foto (in quello spazio cadono solo le pieghe del fondale che non solo non aggiungono nulla di valido alla foto ma ne deteriorano la riuscita). ;) Un saluto! |
| sent on October 26, 2012 (19:17) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)
Thanks for the comment and advice. Grazie per il commento e i consigli. |
| sent on January 25, 2013 (9:26) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)
Yeah, or open the aperture or you get away from it. However you can also blur in post (here only one example in which I have cloned some folds residual is just to give you an idea)
Eh si, o apri il diaframma o ti metti lontano da esso. Comunque si può anche sfocare in post (qui solo un esempio in cui non ho clonato alcune pieghe residue, è solo per darti l'idea)
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| sent on January 25, 2013 (9:58) | This comment has been automatically translated (show/hide original)
And you're right. The result is clearly better. Thanks for the advice and Gtabbi thanks for the example that was very helpful. E si avete proprio ragione. Il risultato è nettamente migliore. Grazie per i consigli e Gtabbi grazie per l'esempio che mi è stato molto utile. |
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